Wednesday, May 13, 2009

IF ONLY THEY MADE MEN LIKE THIS - PART V






SHE FINGURED HIS CURLY LOCKS , AND LOOKED BEYOND THE FACE SNOOZING IN HER LAP ........SHE CARESSED HIM - GENTLY , HER FINGERS KNEEDING HIS TIRED FOREHEAD - HER HEART BEATING WITH EVERY BIT OF COLOUR THAT RETURNED TO HIS FACE .........YES SHE LOVED HIM - BEYOND THE SCHOOL CANTEENS, BEYOND THE HOSTEL ROOMS , BEYOND THE TANGLED BED SHEETS - SHE LOVED HIM , AND HE LOVED HER - THEIR LOVE HAD CARRIED THEM THROUGH FOR YEARS....

YET , SHE KNEW - IT WOULD NOT LAST FOREVER - THEY HAD LIVED IN THE MOMENT , AND HE HAD BRUSHED OFF ANY ATTEMPTS TO TRY AND PICTURE A FUTURE

IT HAD GONE DOWN WELL WITH HER TOO - IT ADDED THE MISSING ZING TO HER ROUTINE - WHICH WORKED WONDERS FOR THEIR CHEMISTRY ........

SHE KNEW EXACTLY HOW UNEXPECTED HE WAS - SHE KNEW HOW DEEP HIS FISTS GOT CUT WHEN HE RAMMED THEM INTO WALLS IN FRUSTATION , SHE KNEW HOW HARD HIS HANDS FELT WHEN THEY WERE SEEKING REASSURANCE THAT SHE WAS STILL THEIR - IN THE SAME WAY SHE KNEW THEY WOULD NOT LAST .........

SHE LOOKED BEYOND THE SLEEPING FACE ...AND PICTURED HERSELF WITH A LINE OF FACELESS STRANGER - HIS FACE BLURRED , SHE BRUSHED BACK THE LOCKS SHE HAD BEEN CURLING AROUND HER FINGER - AND FACED THE RESIGNATION - THEY WOULD NOT LAST

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SHE WOKE UP WITH A START . IT HAD BEEN THE MOST TERRIBLE NIGHTMARE EVER - SHE SHOOK EVER SO SLIGHTLY - AS SHE ROUGHED HIM UP ...HE TURNED AND HAD HER DOWN IN A SECOND - "I NEVER KNEW NICE GIRLS WERE SO GREEDY....." HE KISSED HER NECK ,
SHE JERKED AT HIM ANGRILY - "STOP IT ,"AND SHUVED HIM OFF...
HE TOWERED OVER HER , THEN SENSING HER EXPRESSION - SIGHED AND ASKED ""WHAT HAPPENED , ARE WE OUT OF MILK AGAIN ?"
SHE RESIGNED - HEAVING A HUGE SIGH - AND PUSHED HIM OFF ........
HE ALLOWED HER TO GET OUT OF BED - AND WENT BACK TO SLEEP
TEARS WELLED UP IN HER EYES - HE NEVER USED TO DO THAT , EARLIER - HE HAD CHANGED .......HE DID'NT LOVE HER ANY LONGER ......
SHE THUMPED HER FEET - AND WENT ON WITH HER WORK- SILENTLY MOPING ...SHE DRESSED AND WAS ABOUT TO LEAVE , TO CRY OFF TO HER FRIENDS ...........

HE CLUTCHED HER BY HER ARM - IN A GRIP THAT HURT .JERKING HER CHIN UP , HE LOOKED AT THE REPROACHFUL EYES - "WHAT HAPPENED?? IF U WONT TELL ME , ATLEAST SCREEN THE AREAS I HAVE TO GUESS AT ...." HIS EYES , TWINKLED MISCHIEVOUSLY -

SHE REMEMBERED ,HOW SHE USED TO FORGET EVERYTHING WHEN SHE USED TO LOOK INTO HIS EYES - SHE FELT NOTHING BUT AN URGE TO SLAP HIM NOW -SHE HAD CHANGED TOO .......
SHE FREED HER SELF AND TOLD HIM - "DON'T YOU DARE TREAT ME LIKE THAT , I AM NOT ONE OF YOUR SPORT BUDDIES , AND THAT GRIP HURT - HAVE SOME RESPECT FOR WOMEN ...SHE BABBLED ON...." HIS EYES , GREW IN WONDERMENT , THEN RELAXED - "LIL MISS HAS A PROBLEM WITH SOME ROUGHIN HUH ??? " , SHE LOOKED AT HIM , AND CURSED THE DAY SHE MET HIM ....SHE STORMED OUT OF THE APARTMENT - TO FIND COFFEE AND A GOOD FRIEND IN WHOM SHE COULD CONFIDE HOW HORRIBLE HE REALLY WAS .........

HE LOOKED AT HER , HUFFING AND PUFFING .......AND LEFT HER ARM SUDDENLY......... SHE FELL BACKWARDS ... FUMING IN ANGER - IN FLAT TWO SECONDS SHE WAS OUT.....


HE WHISTLED , WHILE HE HEARD HER ROARING AT THE ELEVATOR ATTENDANT.......

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SHE HAD POURED HER TROUBLES , OVER A POT OF BLACK COFFEE - AND WAS READY TO DISSOLVE INTO TEARS AT THE SLGHTEST PROVOCATION ......SHE NEEDED SYMPATHY - AND LOTS OF IT !

HER GIRL FRIEND - LET OUT A FULL THROATED LAUGH - OF A VOLUME SHE NEVER KNEW HER MOUSY FRIEND COULD MANAGE .......

"ARE YOU SURE U ARNT DOWN WITH PMS OR SUMTHING ....THE POOR GUY , YOU MESSED UP HIS MORNING JUST COZ OF A DREAM ....DARLING SUMTIMES UR SOOO AMUSING"

HE WAS NOT ONLY AN EVIL MANUPULATOR - BUT A FRIEND STEALER TOO ....SHE HAD BEEN IN BED WITH NOTHING LESS THAN SATAN HIMSELF.........

SHE GOT UP AND LEFT - HUFFING IN HER NEW PENCIL HEELS - ATLEAST SHOPPING STILL REMAINED UNTOUCHED BY HIS INFLUENCE...

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TIRED OF HIS PROVOCATIVE GAMES , MAN HANDLING AND HER FRIENDS UNSYMPATHISING NATURE ....SHE LEFT FOR HER PARENTS

THEY HAD CALLED HER - AND SHE KNEW IT MUST BE SUMTHING FOR SURE...........

SHE PACKED'HER BAGS - PULLED OUT THE MORE "APPROPRIATE " CLOTHES FROM HER CLOSET , AND LEFT ........LOCKING UP THE APARTMENT BEHIND HER - LEAVING A NOTE WITH THE ELEVATOR ATTENDANT - "AM OFF TO MY PARENTS"
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NOTHING COULD HAVE PREPARED HER FOR WHAT AWAITED HER BACK HOME - SHE SAT DRESSED IN A CHIFFOUN SAREE ...EYES WATERING , AND MADE UP IN LAYERS OF KOHL

HER PARENTS HAD FIXED SOME GUY TO COME AND SEE HER !!!!
SOME GUY SHE DID'NT EVEN KNOW!!!!

SHE WAS SHELL - SHOCKED .......HER HANDS HAD TREMBLED WHEN SHE HAD CALLED UP HIS NUMBER , TO TELL HIM ABOUT THE CATASTROPHE - HE HAD'NT PICKED UP
HE HAD DISABLED VOICEMAIL - THE ELEVATOR GUY TOLD HER HE HAD'NT BEEN BACK SINCE SHE LEFT


SHE WONDERED AMIDST ACUTE HYSTERIA - DID SHE POSSESS PROPHETIC POWERS ???

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HER PROTESTS , HAD BEEN BEATEN DOWN . SHE WAS SUPPOSED TO GO AND MEET "THE PARENTS" IN LESS THAN FIVE MINUTES - SHE PLANNED VARIOUS SCHEMES ...........
BUT IN HER HEART SHE KNEW - HE WOULD'NT CARE ...........HE HAS'NT EVEN CALLED - HE DID'NT EVEN STOP ME FROM GOING - IN HER MIND SHE PICTURED HIM SMASHING GLASSES , BLEEDING FISTS, ROUGHING HER UP - TEARFULLY ASKING HER TO BE WITH HIM - SHE ENJOYED THE PROSPECT OF HAVING HIM UNDER HER FOR ONCE ------ SHE REARRANGED HER SAREE - SHE HAD ALWAYS BEEN EAGER TO PLEASE TYPES ANYWAY.......

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SHE HAD MET THE GROOMS PARENTS - ANSWERED APPROPRIATELY ..AND NOW SHE HAD THE WORST CASE OF PALPITATIONS ..........SHE HAD MESSED UP

SHE SAT IN THE BALCONY - WAITING FOR THE PERSONAL MEETING WITH THE GROOM - HE WAS YET TO ARRIVE , AS HE WAS CAUGHT IN TRAFFIC ........

HER LONE ATTEMPT TO PIQUE HER LOVER HAD GONE TERRIBLY AWRY......SHE CURSED HERSELF AND LONGED TO RUN AWAY ........
SHE SIGHED -IT WAS A BEAUTIFUL SAREE TO MESS UP .......MAYBE MEETING A NEW GUY MIGHT JUST DO HER GOOD -
SHE CHECKED HER CELLPHONE - HE STILL HADNT CALLED......

************************************************************************************* SHE ARRANGED THE DEMURE EXPRESSION ON HER FACE ..........SHE HEARD THE SOFT STEPS OF HIGH QUALITY BOOTS - SHE HOPED AGAINST HOPE HE WOULD BE A TERRIBLE PERSON - SO THAT SHE COULD HATE HIM WITHOUT THINKING........

HE SAID IN A SMALL DEEP VOICE -- "HELLO MAAM...."
SHE FELT , TINGLES AT THE BACK OF HER NECK - IT WAS A VERY SEXY VOICE - IT WAS A VOICE LACED WITH MEAN MOCKING COURTESY - LIKE HE COULD SEE THROUGH HER LITTLE FEMINITIES -
SHE JERKED UP HER HEAD ......AND REALISED
IT WAS A VOICE SHE KNEW VERY WELL !!!!!!!

HE STOOD THERE IN FULL GLORY - CLEAN SHAVED - FULL THROTTLED - SUITED UP - TOWERING OVER HER -HIS EYES TWINKLING ......

SHE FORGOT HERSELF - DID'NT CARE FOR THE SAREE.......AND RUSHED AT HIM FISTS FIRST .......

HIS HANDS DOWN HER WAIST - HE LIFTED HER CLOSER TO HIS FACE - AND SHE KISSED HIM FULL ON ........... WITH SUCH VEROCITY ..........THAT EVEN HE WAS SHOCKED

HER HANDS SPOILT HIS CAREFULLY MOUSSED HAIR -
AFTER FIFTEEN MINUTES ,HE PUT HER DOWN ...BUT SHE STILL CLUTCHED ONTO THE COLLAR OF HIS SHIRT --- "I HATE YOU ..... YOU KNOW THAT ....." SHE SAID BETWEEN BREATHS...
HE PULLED HER CLOSER ... AND WITH HIS STRAIGHT CHARACTERISTIC HONESTY TOLD HER ...- "THAT ..... IS PRETTY EVIDENT ...."

LETS SAY - SHE REALISED THAT AFTER ALL THEY WERE GOING TO LAST....... AND FOR THE FIRST TIME ...SHE DID'NT MIND BEING PROVED WRONG ..........

22 Comments:

Saumya said...

oh my god!!!awesome...........wow gettin to marry d guy u slept wid..cool..........

Sanjukta said...

*sniff sniff*


itz gud 2 see dat de "Nothin lasts Forevr"-syndrome has been proved 2 b untrue in dis story :p

btw m a sucker fr ur cute ,happy endin stories :)

Trishla Dubey said...

OMG Devika... I love this one.. the best! shit yaar... i just hope this happens to me as well ... :)

LOVED IT ABSOLUTELY!!!! **swoons**

yayyyyyyyyyyyyyy....

this one made me feel soooo.... romantic and stuf... love it!! and its awesome! :)

PHOTOGENIC DEVIL said...

thnx saumya ...........

only u cld have said that

PHOTOGENIC DEVIL said...

@ sanjukta - lolz........
unfortunately - im not sure such a charasmatic guy exists in real life or not

will keep writing till u dont get bored with them

PHOTOGENIC DEVIL said...

trishla - lol
me too !!!!!!!!!
thnxxxxxxxx

Sanjukta said...

@Deevika..gee,I hope dey exist *grins*
xD

& d'uh, getin bored wid ur stories is sumthin dat isnt likely 2 happen in de near future atleast :D

Lukin fwrd 2 lotz MORE of de romantic stuff ^_____^

Udita said...

*swoon*...really sweet..!!

PHOTOGENIC DEVIL said...

thnx sanjs...........jayee

@udita : thnx babe

Bejin Hakumei said...

My humble consolations to you, my friend, but this shit stinks real bad.

It's too filmy for one.
And as for the rest, too romantic to handle.


PS: Don't tell me I stink!
PPS: I love reading your blog and I want to shoot myself for it.

Kudos.

PHOTOGENIC DEVIL said...

@IRA : NO U DONT STINK
AS LONG AS U LUV READING IT , I KNW U LIKE IT , FANTASIZE BOUT IT , AND ARE JUST TRYING TO PRESERVE UR IMAGE BY SAYING IT STINKS

LOL
I KNW , ITS TOO FILMY- I KNW ITS TOO ROMANTIC- THAT IS MY PURPOSE

LOL

THNX
I CAN SHOOT U IF U WANT ?

Bejin Hakumei said...

Photogenic Bitch, that was just to console you. Or rather protect my petite self from your blows.

I don't want you to get annoyed with me; not because I care for you, but because I care for myself.

But then again, if it's death you have to offer, go ahead, shoot me.
I am all yours. Take me in your arms.

XD

PHOTOGENIC DEVIL said...

lol

i dont hit underfed boys ............

Bejin Hakumei said...

Hard luck.

I'll try transforming into a hot chick to turn you on.

:P

PHOTOGENIC DEVIL said...

ya
sureeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Anant~aka~Snarl said...

This Trishla girly girl is AGAIN posting useless "swoony" comments and noble Anant is getting irritated. We should BAN her swoony self at Blogger, Anant boldly suggests!


P.S.: OKAY.....This, yo know, is brilliant. Hence, I won't say as much. Lets just pretend that it suffices for me to say that the idea of the story/memoir((super-wicked wink)) beginning with a "fingering-scene" sort ov worked for me....(Not that I like to see guys fingered usually, though.)

XD


Still... masterful and sexual as ever! You truly ARE my leading light...((even after all I used to say in those "troubled times" of the Cold War...(yes, the one in the early 1900s)..sachhi...))


P.P.S.:

Well.
Lastly, you bes gettin' lesbian all over again with the Hakumei girly girl?

PHOTOGENIC DEVIL said...

@anant : thnx for watever u meant as a compliment

regarding trishla - she obliges me by commenting , and if it is swoonworthy for her , we will let her stay that ways

reagrding hekumei and me --- she was always my preffered girl toy

*smirks*

Mon Espace said...

Woah! ok..cant say i 'did not' see that comin..its written nicely. im sure completely mushy kushy girls would LOVE your blog...

aptly named too :)

G'luck & Cheers!

PHOTOGENIC DEVIL said...

lol
meant not ur type ??
i sort of meant the earlier posts

where the sexy part is done
still thnx for giving it a read girl

ZiLliOnBiG said...

WOW, your blog is one girly hangout, i guess. for a moment i thought i have turned GAY. So much pink and candyfloss. Amazing.BLOGGER would be very happy, someone has made good use of it.

BTW, thanks for the comment. And calling me a DOG. Thats a huge compliment(hope dogs agree), i love dogs.Cheers keeping churning

PHOTOGENIC DEVIL said...

thnx a tonne


though pink and being gay ??? i thought it was metrosexual ..........

Anonymous said...

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